Okay... slowly getting through commenting on some stuff. xD

I love the Kaleidoscope stories. I like how you're slowly revealing the world and characters through multiple stories. I like how the first Kaleidoscope story (forgot the name, sorry) set up some characters and the world, etc. I'm learning more through each story. c:

And I congratulate you on not messing up the sex scene. xD I've stumbled onto stories (mostly fanfiction lol) that handle it pretty clumsily. It's often the "insert tab A into slot B" variety but other times it has so much purple prose you can't tell if the characters are doing each other or doing acid. xD Just implying most actions as you did here is just fine.
However, the following scene change is a little off. I know it's a scene change cuz of Chloe, but I personally think it's better if the writer sets the scene before the characters. Something as simple as "At the bar, Chloe hopped up..." but you can probably write something better. xD And it's just my two cents, nothing you have to change here.